One night while struck by the whim to express some of my more amorous feelings, I wrote this. Tell me what you think.
Kosaki Onodera:
Kosaki Onodera:
What a well-designed character. Honestly, I feel she gets
the short end of the stick, considering she loses to Chitoge in the end. A
horribly predictable plot twist, really. But, that just leaves more for the
rest of us otaku who would not feel the slightest bit awful about picking her
up and making her feel better. (Assuming she were real.) Her relationship with
the protagonist is the one I wish they would have ran with and ended with.
She’s almost perfect, especially for him. As far as a romantic interest in my
opinion… Her only fault is that… She lacks the passion and fire that I go head
over heels for. She’s the perfect wife and spouse type character and would make
an excellent mother, but that’s the extent of her. Realistically, that’s all I
would need, and this is why she occupies almost the top spot on my fictional
character list. Even without the passion, she more than makes up for it with
her personality, and how she is. She’s full of compassion and grace, and an
almost unearthly amount of patience and kindness towards everyone. There can’t
be a mean bone in her body. She has a very quiet, unassuming aura about her.
And she is remarkably intuitive, being easily able to read the people around
her and go with the flow. And with her tendency to be easily surprised and
flustered, one would always have fun with her, usually at the expense of her
embarrassment, however. But underneath that adorable, fragile little exterior,
I feel like on the inside, there is so much more. Her determination is quiet,
but that motivates her to step further outside her comfort zone, and she seems
like the type of person that, when placed in a situation where she may have to
step up, her compassion and silent determination give way to a person who will
never give up or give in.
She’s beautiful in that… Girl-Next-Door way. With her dark
brown hair in a small asymmetrical fashion that falls to her shoulder blades;
large, expressive amber-eyes set in a cute little heart-shaped face with the
most wonderful of facial expressions. Her resting face looks so cute… She
always has a small smile on, like she’s constantly amused by something or
there’s always a funny little thought in her mind. She’s really adorable. She
gets flustered so easily, and she may not be highly confident, but the “I don’t
know if I can do this but I’ll give it a shot!” attitude really works with her.
She always has the most earnest look on her face, like she’s low-key putting
110 percent of her effort behind everything she’s doing. Her facial expressions
when flustered or embarrassed are endearing, and those rare moments when she
and the main character realize they’re having a moment… Her face has the
most…enchanting expression. Part sultry, part soft and part timid, speaking
things like, “I love you. I want you to love me back. But I’m incapable of
doing anything but reciprocating, so you’ll have to make the first move. But
once you do, I can show you how I feel.” She has a very attractive body
physically too. She’s petite and has a very moderate build: slender, but with
the right amount of curves to match. She’s not overly large or undersized,
she’s not disproportioned. She has, in my opinion, the ideal body type, even
though she constantly worries about her own weight. (And even working in a
confectionery, she still maintains that body type. It’s quite impressive.)
She doesn’t have that many talents to speak of, but is
rather good with aesthetics. She can’t cook all that well, and she’s not highly
athletic. She is of above average intelligence, and has good sense in her head,
but she isn’t a genius. She’s a bit clumsy, and a bit anxious, and very quiet.
She reminds me of a flower. Any flower you might think of, but ten thousand
times as beautiful to look at. She has an inner beauty, and an amazing aura.
One that speaks of grace and softness, delicate and unassuming. Simple. But
such simplicity only belies the depth of her person. She may look meek, but on
the inside, she is so much more. One can behold it in her eyes. Full of
intelligence. Of life. Of a soft inner passion that you never see expressed
openly. Just by her eyes and her words and actions. It lives in her care for
other people. It lives in her determination. It lives in her clumsiness and her
tendency to be easily disconcerted. Such an innocent young woman and so
stunningly attractive. She reminds me of that type of girl who would spend all
her time under a tree or sitting outside and gazing at the sights life has to
offer, or sitting inside a coffee shop writing tons of things that came to her
mind. The type who would sit and listen to anyone who would talk to her, and be
there with any sort of advice or comfort they could need. The type of girl who
would sit and just be there with you when you need company or who would care
for you when ill. She would be the person who would, after listening to you and
sitting with you, give you an empathetic look followed by the most wonderful
hug. She is the sweetest, most compassionate girl. Motherly and kind. Oh so
adorable.